Divorce - (revisited)
Published by Aakarsh under Verses on Wednesday, August 17, 2005
this never happened before, that i am reposting same writing again. so, it shows that even i have fallen in the recycling-trap. perhaps i would have written the same thing again, intact,same words..same phrases..if i had to write it today, to reflect the thoughts jammed in my mind.and i did exactly that.even before i could realize, i (re)wrote this one in my Financial Management Note Book, for some strange-inevitable-unknown reason..still eluding me.
like a companion, my shadow used to live with me.
but we have now divorced each other.
ever since my feet took me into dark trenches,
like a jilted lover,
it began grumbling dementedly,
that i no longer sought its companionship.
i quetched in return,
that i could walk alone,
in the bright paths, full of light...
but in dark, when i needed a companion,
it abandoned me, without leaving any trace.
my companion used to live with me,but..
my shadow and me--we have divorced each other now.
And the guy sitting next to me read it and asked,"heard about divorcing wife, but how can you divorce your shadow?".
like a companion, my shadow used to live with me.
but we have now divorced each other.
ever since my feet took me into dark trenches,
like a jilted lover,
it began grumbling dementedly,
that i no longer sought its companionship.
i quetched in return,
that i could walk alone,
in the bright paths, full of light...
but in dark, when i needed a companion,
it abandoned me, without leaving any trace.
my companion used to live with me,but..
my shadow and me--we have divorced each other now.
And the guy sitting next to me read it and asked,"heard about divorcing wife, but how can you divorce your shadow?".
6 comments:
Old wine in old bottle. But the wine tastes good
oh crap! So it was you who had posted on ravi's blog.. I thought it was ravi's.
dude gandargolaka!
not fair ... it was clearly written that the work under consideration was posted by aakarsh... confusion lies within thyself. thanx in advance for your opinion :-P
yup! mea culpa!
at once assuring and scary!but then i guess thats the whole point of life...comfort in pain and vive versa!
but the guy who sat beside you sure has a long way to go ;-)
well a great attempt
keep it up
and a sincere advice 4 u do not write anything like thing again when u r sitting along with that person or with any person of same qualities
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