And Then

Thoughts Began To Fly

A`Mazed

Published by Aakarsh under on Saturday, July 16, 2005
YES :

No ridges.. no skies...
Wayward dreams melted in cries...
Life afresh from nothing..
Hopes of future still chasing something...

BUT STILL :

Fantasies play hard and wild..
propositions pushing all the while..
now a man..now a child...
When hopes begin to dry Futile..

And Then :

The world seems new again.
a new me..out in chase...
new clouds..few dreams.. and some rain...
Journey of life...just a Maze..

Comments (4 Responses so far)

4 comments:

Ragz said... @ Sunday, July 17, 2005 2:04:00 AM

Yet:

Skies are cicular
Fantasies ,Dreams are spectacular
The chase is not meaningless
Abetting hopes are sure dimensionless

I dont know if this 4 liner disrupts the flow...just felt like adding an appendix. I am sometimes A'mazed how you can comeup with these verses.

palamoor-poragadu said... @ Sunday, July 17, 2005 2:31:00 AM

AABB, ABAB, ABAB ...

Iam just trying to enjoy the beauty of AABB scheme which is not so frequent...

With this you shattered my idea that your thoughts (to words) invariably go deep... this one is very light and crisp... keep going !!

divya said... @ Monday, July 18, 2005 3:31:00 PM

sums it all up in a rather light yet profound manner...yes..im off to the jungle og wonder yet again with this product of yourz.lovely..i like the concept of "now a man..now a child.."

Vittorio D'Amore said... @ Tuesday, July 19, 2005 5:56:00 PM

The idea of my blog is to build a "inspiration flux box" able to contain texts, ideas, stories, topics, speechs and images about everything.

Then these materials will inspire the work of our musical collective.

the blog is http://mpnet.blogspot.com

If u are a poet, a musician, a videomaker a photograoher and want to participate to this network, please send us material at:

damoreman@katamail.com

Thanks a lot!!!

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